There's some nice details in the design, but the gameplay could use a bit more refinement. Overall, everything moves REALLY fast, and some parts are kinda glitchy/jagged.
Wow, this is really challenging and fun! Great idea!
This is incredibly fascinating, and scrolling through it surely envokes a sense of awe. Nice work!
I'm sorry, but this game has a LOT of programming flaws and could use some improvement.
You seem to be more focused on not being blammed than improving from your summary (which I'd change, because otherwise you're gonna get a LOT of flames for saying you're mom thought it was good. It's a very noobish comment.)
If you get blammed, and I hate to say that you probably will because this needs a lot of work, use the critique people give you and use it to improve you're next work. If your plan is to give up if you don't do great the first tim, you have the wrong idea about flash and art in general.
Ha i didnt get blammed :P! thanks for yer review!
Fun, with flaws
Great game. Simple, yet fast paced and fun. But everything just stoped on the last level for me. Not like, froze, but no more dough came even though I waited a while.
P.S. BRING THE NEW FILM TO THE US PLEASE.
Good music, nice design, and a good way to warm up your brain. I highly enjoyed this. :)
nice, but has improvement room
Very addictive with a nice design. Because of how long the game is, though, I REALLY wish there was a way to skip strait to the level you were last on if you leave the game and take a break.
Simple controls, nice graphics and sound, and lots of explosions. Nothing overly new, but deffinatl well crafted and addictive.
Not bad, not great, needs directions
You have to put clear instructions in your game.
Creative, but bugged
Interesting and clever idea, but there's a glitch where if a character tries to go left and it can't, it may pass that movement to the next chapter when it dies. It can cause a lot of problems.
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